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sharon108   
Jan 22, 2009
Graduate / Evaluation of Targetted Admission Essay [3]

Hello, I need help with this targetted admission essay to the Masters of Information Management Program at the University of Maryland, College Park. Here are the instructions that they have given for the essay:

**Targeted applicant essay (this is submitted instead of the Personal Statement in the Application Supplemental Form). This 500-word essay should address the following four questions:

What do you see as the most interesting and/or significant opportunities provided by the information field?
information is knowledge and knowledge is power

Why are you interested in the particular degree for which you are applying, and why do you wish to pursue this degree at the College of Information Studies?

What strengths would you bring to graduate study and to the information profession?

What are your career plans, and how would this degree advance them?

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As the famous adage goes "Information is knowledge and knowledge is power". In today's world where every person wants to have information available at their fingertips at the click of a button, technologists and engineers are sweating away trying to cater to the ever increasing demands of industries and individuals. With the enormous information superhighways available today, the need to manage information has become greater than ever.

Since my early childhood, I had decided that I wanted a career in technology. After completing my high school, I decided to do a Diploma in Computer Engineering which would give me a base in both, the hardware and software aspects of computers. During my diploma, I developed a liking for information systems and software hence I decided to pursue a Bachelors degree in Information Technology. Now after almost completing my Bachelors, I have set a goal in my mind to shape my career in the field of Information Systems. I will need a graduate degree which will build on my core IT skills and give me an in depth knowledge of the intricacies of Information Management for a successful career.

Having considered the programs offered by various universities in the United States, I found that the courses offered by College of Information Studies appealed to me, as it has the subjects that covered my primary interest for the Masters course. This would certainly go a long way and help me fulfill my desires of becoming a leading entrepreneur and succeeding right from inception. Having studied the subjects offered, and gone through the Team Experience and Capstone project, would certainly position me at desired levels to pursue my interest effectively in the IT industry.

My aim for applying to the graduate program in Information Management is to train myself for a career as a business analyst in the Information Technology industry. My long term objective is to venture into technology management consultation. I envisage myself leading a team helping organizations drive strategy through efficient technology management and planning. A Masters of Information Management in the College of Information Studies would be a crucial step in achieving my goal.

The dynamic learning environment offered by the College of Information Studies would broaden my horizons even further. Subjects such as Web-enabled Databases, User Interaction with Information Systems and Information Technology and Organizational Context, offered by the College of Information Studies would impart insight into business oriented technology in the field of communications and data warehousing. Moreover, the Team Experience provides the opportunity to work with students having like-minded interests; this will help in developing my leadership skills.

Since any relationship is a two-way channel, I feel that in my association with your university I too can contribute to graduate studies and the information field with my unquenchable thirst for learning new things and ability to translate knowledge into practice as well as my passion for the field. I believe that I can bring in innovation through my multidimensional thinking and stand out among a crowd of people with my sound technical as well as people skills. Extreme willingness to learn and tireless dedication will catapult me into the heart of IT and information management.

The College of Information Studies is a perfect choice offering the students to gain exposure to a diverse student body and world class faculty. The program has the perfect blend of technology and management courses. I believe that the program would prepare me to effectively use information technology to address business problems. Through your program, I wish to develop the expertise, cultural skills, and the global mindset essential for succeeding in the dynamic and diverse environments prevalent today. Furthermore I am sure that a graduate degree from a prestigious university like yours will arm me with the credentials required to face the industry and make the gamut of opportunities for me, endless!
sharon108   
Jan 22, 2009
Undergraduate / My association with computers began long before people of my age could lay their hands on one; SOP [4]

Could anyone please review this Statement of Purpose? Thank You!

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Statement of Purpose

My association with computers began long before people of my age could lay their hands on one. My father told me that my tryst with technology began since I was four years old, when I opened the equipment screws using a screw driver from my father's toolkit. I have keenly inherited my father's love for technology, as he being an Electronics Engineering Graduate used to assemble and repair various electronic equipment including personal desktop computers at our home during his spare time. Needless to say that he has been my greatest inspiration all through my life.

My aim for applying to the graduate program in Management Information Systems is to train myself to be a business analyst in the Information Technology industry. My long term objective is to venture into technology management consultation. I envision myself leading a team helping organizations to develope strategies through efficient technology management and planning. A Masters in Information Systems in The Carnegie Mellon University would be the crucial step in achieving my goal.

My interest and curiosity in computers grew when we got a computer in our house at the time when I was merely five. I played my first computer game on DOS when I was only six. A computer found its way into our house at a time when these machines were hardly available at work places. I was exhilarated when our school offered us computers as a subject during my third grade. Seeing my dedication, my teachers encouraged me to help them conduct practical sessions for my class. I ranked first in the primary section of the school for 'Computers'. My knowledge of computers not only helped me academically but also helped in numerous other projects which I participated in and won during my entire school life.

My proficiency with computers and immense interest in the subject, right from the early stages of my life, prompted me to pursue studies in the field of computers. After completing my high school education, I secured admission in one of the best colleges in the city of Mumbai (Shri Bhagubhai Mafatlal Polytechnic) for a three year course leading to a Diploma in Computer Engineering.

My academic dedication fructified during my first year and got me the first rank in my class. During the course of the program we studied subjects such as C, DBMS, Microprocessors, System programming where I was usually always the first to complete practical assignments and secure the highest marks in practical examinations. In my final year, 'System Programming' inspired me to a great extent enabling me to step beyond the syllabus to program the first phase of an assembly language compiler using the C language.

The project work for my final year diploma was developing a Hospital Management System for a medium sized hospital. As the group leader for my project team, I handled various aspects of the project from coding to final testing and documentation. My project was lauded(word use: try ranked, praised, etc) to be one of the best projects in the institute.

After securing a top 10 percentile score in my diploma, I gained an admission to one of the oldest and most revered technical institutions of India, V.J.T.I. and managed to secure one among the three seats offered to diploma students for direct admission to the second year of the Bachelor's program in engineering. Having acquired a strong base in hardware and software fundamentals during the Diploma program, I am now sure that I want to get into the heart of computing and learn software. Therefore, I've opted for Information Technology.

My eventful life at V.J.T.I. began when I delivered my first Technical Paper Presentation on Computer aided Language Learning during the technical festival, "Technovanza". During the course of the next year, Nanotechnology and DNA computing was gathering momentum as a new technological advance in the field of computing and data storage. I was curious to know about this new technology so I attended a national level seminar on "New Trends in Nanotechnology" after which I presented a paper on the same at the IEEE Technical Paper Presentation at my college.

V.J.T.I. provided me with a lot of opportunities to demonstrate my leadership and managerial capabilities. I had the opportunity to organize many events at our annual Sports festival "Enthusia" and the cultural festival of my college, "Pratibimb". My interest and proficiency in creating and managing database applications, gave me the opportunity to consolidate the entire V.J.T.I. alumni database and develop a front end application to access and maintain the database easily.

In the fourth semester, I designed an integrated chat and organizer in JAVA for which I scored a GPA of 10, the highest in my class. My interest and love for managing information also got me the post of a Library Manager for the Association of Computer Enthusiasts (ACE) in my college. Currently I am developing an Information Management System for efficient event management and data retrieval for ACE.

During the third year of my Bachelor's program, a few of my classmates and I started the Entrepreneurship Cell (E-Cell) in V.J.T.I. I was later assigned the post of Technical Head for the E-Cell. During my tenure, I established the database and messaging system. In August 2008, I got the opportunity to represent my college at the E-Cell Student Exchange program held at Dr. D. Y. Patil University.

Beyond college, my skills and interest in the 'C' language landed me a summer job to teach 'C' at a private computer institute. During my summer holidays I developed a complete data management and billing system for my dentist. I was also made the database administrator for MENSA India soon after qualifying the MENSA test with 99+ percentile and becoming a life member.

My love for troubleshooting made me successfully disinfected, repair and recover data from many of my college computers for staff and students and configure antivirus measures to prevent further losses. The LAN for the Humanities Department of V.J.T.I. was also setup and configured successfully by me.

For my final year project, our project group decided to do something very different, something that had never been attempted at the undergraduate level. It was decided that our task is to create an input devices-free computer, eliminating components such as the mouse and the keyboard. Our final year project titled "Finger Mouse" is being designed to enable users to control and navigate the computer using only their fingers. The ultimate goal of our project is to benefit the less educated and disabled persons to use the computer with ease. The system could also be implemented at networked kiosks for various purposes eliminating the efforts towards maintenance or replacement of touch screens and other input devices.

During the time that I spent as a student in this college I feel that I have learnt many new concepts and put them into application. After careful introspection, I am determined to become a successful entrepreneur to benefit society through the use of technology. Therefore, I feel that after gaining all the technical knowledge, I must now build up my entrepreneurial and managerial skills, and I feel that the MISM program at the Heinz College at The Carnegie Mellon University has the right mix of technical as well as managerial techniques which will drive me towards my goal. Moreover, the facilities, scholarship, and traditions of The Carnegie Mellon University, combined with the caliber of the student's body, make me confident that I will be stimulated throughout the course of my studies. Upon graduating from MISM, a variety of options are available for pursuing my objectives. Pursuing a graduate degree in the field of Information Systems Management with tireless concentrated efforts and unshakeable dedication will surely drive me towards my goal.
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