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korch   
Dec 10, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email? [8]

you are right about first and second one, I will fix them next time. however some people say firstly, secondly is grammatically illogical. I'm not sure about that.
korch   
Dec 10, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email? [8]

I got your points, thanks alot for answering. okk and I are taking the same toefl class, so we probably write essays with the same structure :)

I also will read all your replies to her essays to learn more.
korch   
Dec 9, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email? [8]

When discussing important topics, do you prefer to use the telephone or email? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Although I admit that sending an email seems more convenience than making a call, I prefer to use the telephone instead of the email. I have there reasons why I prefer the telephone. First, it a timesaving second, it is more effective and third, it is a better way to express my feelings.

First, the telephone is a timesaving. For instance, I am working in a telecommunicating company. I use the telephone for all urgent situations because I don't have time to lose with typing an email and waiting for a reply. I have urgent situations all the time in working hours. Thus, the email is a useless and a time wasting way to communicate for me.

Second, the telephone is more effective way to communicate. Generally I work till the late at night. I can be very careless at these times because I am sleepless and exhausted. For instance, one night, I was new at job and sent an email about last situation of my project to our CEO (He has the same first name with my manager) instead of my manager. I was so concerned about his reaction to this situation because he was a very angry person, but even so, he politely warned me to send that email to the right person.

Third, the telephone is a better way to express your feelings. For instance, I wasn't happy in my first job and I decided to quit. Because of my manager's angry characteristic and my lack of self-confidence, I did prefer to send an email instead of making a call. After I sent the email, my manager called me to arrange a meeting. He was angry not because I want to quit job, but because I wanted to quit job by an email. We discussed the situation and then I decided that he was right.

For these reasons, I believe that I prefer to use the telephone because it saves your time, it is more effective and, it is a better way to express your feelings.
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