Writing Feedback / Description on Telecommunicating. [9]

Hi. Can you help me correct this paragraph:

Telecomminicating is a form of computers communication between homes and office. For employee whose job invlve sit at a terminate, the location of the computer is of no consequence. If the machines could commuincate through telephone line, when work is completed, employee can dial the office from a distance site. Recently survey estimated that there is approximately 8.7 million telecommuter. Although numbers is rised anually, the trend doens't come out to be as significance as predicting when the news published.

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