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Dec 15, 2012
Essays / A Tale of Two Cities: Carton's Sacrifice [2]

* I really like your analysis of things and use of quotes from the book to deliver your opinion! Though you need to stop repeating ideas many times like, when kept saying that carton didn't really love Lucie for herself but he felt he needed her to redeem himself and also when you said that his sacrifice ensured the happiness of Lucie and her husband.

* "or loving her in hopes that her love with fix him" I think you meant "would" instead of "with".

I think you did an overall great job (y).
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