Posts by gabbysla
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Grilled Cheese; UNC Chapel Hill- My comfort food [3]
I like what you have done so far with it, the beginning made me want grilled cheese!
for this part " It looks like a simple meal that takes"
I would maybe change it to something like: To most people, this is just an easy meal to make, but to me it's more than just a sandwich. or something like that
Undergraduate /
Alpinen Skiing; Bentley App/ change one thing [3]
the question on the supplement is: If you could change one thing about your high school career, what would it be? (800 characters)
My response:
All through high school I have put a lot of effort into everything I do. Although I put the most into alpine ski racing. If I could go back, I would've spent less time skiing. To anyone who doesn't ski race it is a little difficult to explain but I missed a lot of school days to go to important races. This made me miss important material and sometimes made my grades suffer in the winter months. However, I have learned the importance of meeting with teachers, and I've experienced high levels of competition; so the time I've spent on skiing hasn't been a total loss. I have also learned that for the future of my education, it is essential to balance extra-curricular activities and school work with more focus on school.
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