Scholarship / Culture,and Change among the Sherpa of Nepal ;Scholarship essay [6]

Mr Jiwan recommended me to review your essay regarding the following topic. Where I can see your powerful essay with strong thought but at same time lacks information about sherpas. You should try and find out more about the culture, living style, customs and their values as the main subject of your essay is about sherpa. You can just google it and try more information about sherpa and make your essay even more powerful and effective. However, I wish you all the best for your scholarship and hope to see you in Nepal. Takecare!