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Mar 31, 2013
Letters / My goal is also to find a part time job ; Introduction of Myself [4]

Hi Dr cool,

Sorry for the misunderstanding this is not a cover letter. I was supposed to introduce myself using 300 words to my english 12 teacher....I just wanted to get a feedback on my writing or any grammer errors or sentence structure. Thank you for still helping me...:)
rock 1   
Mar 30, 2013
Letters / My goal is also to find a part time job ; Introduction of Myself [4]

To whom it may concern,
My name is -----------, I am a grade 12 student of ---------------- school. I took English 11 and successfully completed it last year with a mark of 70% ( C+). I wish to complete English 12 online successfully and achieve a mark of 80% (B) by the end of the course. I want to complete English 12 by the end of May so that way I would have sufficient amount of time to prepare for all my final exams as well as English Provincial exam that I am going to be writing. (91)

English 12 is the last course that I need to satisfy BC graduation requirements. My current plans for post secondary education is to go to Vancouver Community Collage (VCC) and complete Nursing Unit Clerk program which is about one year long. My goal is also to find a part time job that will assist me in my collage tuition fees. After completing my program I would like to work in a hospital and gain knowledge about other fields related to nursing and slowly build up my career. (84)

( I did not post last paragraph as I was just supposed to ask questions in that paragraph)
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