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May 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1; alteration in types of travel in England from 1985 to 2000 [NEW]
topic : The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates alteration in types of travel in England from 1985 to 2000 . This table includes three columns and ten rows .
Turning to the details , in both years 1985 and 2000 Cars showed unparalleled figures among the given categories , Additionally Taxi was increase considerably , At the same bicycle was slightly declined , As well , Train , long distance bus and other type of travel experienced an overall growth from 289 miles to 366 , from 54 miles to 124 and from 450 miles to 585 respectively .
On the other hand Walking was not preferred on the new millennium in England so it is present a moderate decrease from 255 to 237 , as well as the Bicycle from 51 to 41 , also local bus has a fall from 429 in 1985 to 247 in 2000 , In other words people turning to use fast transportation over years instead of ordinary ones .
Overall trend shows a rise of all ways to travel from 4,740 in 1985 to 6,475 in 2000 , Another thing there are diversity of using these ways .
could you please give me your feedback to my IELTS writing task 1
THANKS
topic : The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates alteration in types of travel in England from 1985 to 2000 . This table includes three columns and ten rows .
Turning to the details , in both years 1985 and 2000 Cars showed unparalleled figures among the given categories , Additionally Taxi was increase considerably , At the same bicycle was slightly declined , As well , Train , long distance bus and other type of travel experienced an overall growth from 289 miles to 366 , from 54 miles to 124 and from 450 miles to 585 respectively .
On the other hand Walking was not preferred on the new millennium in England so it is present a moderate decrease from 255 to 237 , as well as the Bicycle from 51 to 41 , also local bus has a fall from 429 in 1985 to 247 in 2000 , In other words people turning to use fast transportation over years instead of ordinary ones .
Overall trend shows a rise of all ways to travel from 4,740 in 1985 to 6,475 in 2000 , Another thing there are diversity of using these ways .
could you please give me your feedback to my IELTS writing task 1
THANKS
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