Undergraduate / "Which one is the smarter twin?"- Common App; background or story [9]

I read both this essay and your other one. I think this essay is much more you; it helps me imagine how hard it must be to have a twin (but, admissions officers might see lots of essays about twins. not sure). However, what the other essay had that was great was the specific adventure you had at the airport. This essay seems general. I think this topic is great, but I think you should have a specific story that really articulates your ideas.