Ian Black
Oct 14, 2013
Book Reports / Boo Radley (Arthur Radley) is a mysterious man; Expository Essay to kill a mockingbird [2]
Pretty good! Remember when writing an expository essay, it's important to have a clear, concise and defined thesis statement in the first paragraph of the essay.
"Boo Radley (Arthur Radley) is a mysterious man, and is considered an urban legend in his town. No one knows about his shadowy past, and many people in town regard him as a strange and unstable person.": - Just be sure to back up your thesis with facts that support the thesis. Like how he is crazy or unstable. And provide examples from the book to support that statement. "Boo Radley has done A, B, and C, all strange or weird things that illustrate his strange or weird nature."
Only a couple spelling and grammar errors.
Boo Radley (Arthur Radley) is a mysterious man, he is an urbanleyend legend in town. No one knows what happened to him, they remember him as a crazy and weird man.
"that Boo is still alive.Forexample, when Dill, Jem and Scout sneak over to the Radley Place and peek in through a loose shutter,they see the".
It looks good, you supported your thesis statement that he was mysterious and weird, by giving examples of the weird and mysterious things Boo Radley has done. The mystery surrounding his existence, the chase scene when Jem's pants are caught on the fence, then are found mended on the fence the next day. Scout being mysteriously covered with a blanket by Boo during Miss Maudie's house fire, as well as the presents discovered in the knothole of a tree in Boo Radley's yard, both of which are very mysterious events which support the thesis of Boo being a mysterious man. Very good!
Just keep an eye out for those grammar errors, and everything else looks great. : )
Pretty good! Remember when writing an expository essay, it's important to have a clear, concise and defined thesis statement in the first paragraph of the essay.
"Boo Radley (Arthur Radley) is a mysterious man, and is considered an urban legend in his town. No one knows about his shadowy past, and many people in town regard him as a strange and unstable person.": - Just be sure to back up your thesis with facts that support the thesis. Like how he is crazy or unstable. And provide examples from the book to support that statement. "Boo Radley has done A, B, and C, all strange or weird things that illustrate his strange or weird nature."
Only a couple spelling and grammar errors.
Boo Radley (Arthur Radley) is a mysterious man, he is an urban
"that Boo is still alive.Forexample, when Dill, Jem and Scout sneak over to the Radley Place and peek in through a loose shutter,they see the".
It looks good, you supported your thesis statement that he was mysterious and weird, by giving examples of the weird and mysterious things Boo Radley has done. The mystery surrounding his existence, the chase scene when Jem's pants are caught on the fence, then are found mended on the fence the next day. Scout being mysteriously covered with a blanket by Boo during Miss Maudie's house fire, as well as the presents discovered in the knothole of a tree in Boo Radley's yard, both of which are very mysterious events which support the thesis of Boo being a mysterious man. Very good!
Just keep an eye out for those grammar errors, and everything else looks great. : )