Research Papers / Pride and Prejudice Research Paper [3]

I am working on a research paper on Pride and Prejudice, a 15 page paper consisting of 15 scholarly resources. A rough draft is due tomorrow and I am pretty good at fudging through a rough draft, but I wanted to ask for some advice.

My Thesis: Elizabeth Bennet is submissive to pressures in her life, and reacts accordingly.
I support this through her interactions with Jane, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Wickham (these two are together, because they played off of each other in the story), and her interactions with Mrs. Bennet.

I just wanted to know if any of you had any advice. I am not a strong writer, but am trying to do the best I can. Any help is appreciated!