Angiesclark
Sep 23, 2013
Writing Feedback / May's Camping Trip; stay on topic of the title is the instructions [2]
Hello - could you please provide feedback on this paragraph. title: May's Camping Trip - stay on topic of the title is the instructions
May's Camping Trip
I was excited about the camping trip with my peers. The camping brochure stated that we would have fun activities and a true educational experience. Camp Fox was located east of S.D. County. Nature was alive and active. We seen, deers, birds, rabbits and someone even though they saw a brown bear. The days were fill with nature walks and how the different plants can help us and the one that are harmful. The evens were spent playing games and telling stories and jokes.
Hello - could you please provide feedback on this paragraph. title: May's Camping Trip - stay on topic of the title is the instructions
May's Camping Trip
I was excited about the camping trip with my peers. The camping brochure stated that we would have fun activities and a true educational experience. Camp Fox was located east of S.D. County. Nature was alive and active. We seen, deers, birds, rabbits and someone even though they saw a brown bear. The days were fill with nature walks and how the different plants can help us and the one that are harmful. The evens were spent playing games and telling stories and jokes.
