Undergraduate / Appeal essay, UC Davis of Engineering [3]

I am a ELD student. UC Davis has turned me down. i want to appeal. can somebody help me ? i post my essay on here. As u know, my english is bad, but i want to get into UC Davis. plz don't laugh. thx

To Whom It May Concern:

I'm very appreciate that University of California Davis gave me an opportunity for an appealing. After I received the admission decision from UC Davis, I considered for an appealing to University of California; Davis.

Since I have been living in the United States for 3 years, I am not a native English speaker. But I kept my GPA at 4.0 in High school, also I got an A in calculus community college during summer. I am good at math and science, and I'm considering of major in engineering at UC Davis. UC Davis has a great opportunity for engineering. Even though I have lack of experience about engineering, I'm extremely excited that I might be learning at UC Davis.

However, I have a lot of experience in society. I'm working at McDonald's to get more experiences. As I'm working, I learned lots of English too. I have been involved in a variety of volunteer activities for helping people. I'm trying my best to balance between my study and my job.

I'm very interested in my major at this university. This is the reason why I want to attend UC Davis.

Thank you very much for your time.