baejoseph
Oct 11, 2013
Undergraduate / History repeats itself; BACKGROUND or STORY - central to identity [4]
Thank you! I know my essay is still a tad bit confusing since I chose to intentionally confuse the reader which is a risk I guess I'm taking. I'm an international student from Korea and graduating this winter. For now, I'm preparing several common application essays for regular admissions and not finding any luck with my writing, never really had. I thought this forum would be a great source for ideas and concrete examinations from others, which is really great considering I can't really get much English proofreading from where live. I wasn't born in Virginia but I started my essay with my "Virginian" past to show the conservative and strict rearing I had then to contrast my Indonesian opposite. Again, thank you.
Thank you! I know my essay is still a tad bit confusing since I chose to intentionally confuse the reader which is a risk I guess I'm taking. I'm an international student from Korea and graduating this winter. For now, I'm preparing several common application essays for regular admissions and not finding any luck with my writing, never really had. I thought this forum would be a great source for ideas and concrete examinations from others, which is really great considering I can't really get much English proofreading from where live. I wasn't born in Virginia but I started my essay with my "Virginian" past to show the conservative and strict rearing I had then to contrast my Indonesian opposite. Again, thank you.