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Posts by echan527
Name: Eric Chan
Joined: Nov 9, 2013
Last Post: Nov 15, 2013
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School: Portage Northern High School

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Nov 15, 2013
Undergraduate / I am perfectly content in the Movie Theater [6]

Arriving early, I got the one that's in the center, but not too far back or too close to the screen. I hear buzzes and watch small screens flicker off around me as people shut down all connections to the outside world. The first studio logo fills the screen, and as I sit in silence with a group of strangers, we begin our escape from the real world. We let ourselves feel vulnerable; we experience a story.

I think you are able to omit the But, as you are just describing your preferred seat.

Other than that, your essay sounds great! I really love how you included emotion shared between strangers. It's not something you see everyday, but it truly is effective, and I think that it makes you appear to be a sociable person who can relate with many people. Really enjoyed reading your essay!
echan527   
Nov 10, 2013
Undergraduate / "Ok class. You may start."; Stanford Intellectual Vitality [2]

"Ok class. You may start."

I quickly turned the paper over and there was only 1 problem:

"Show that (Tan(x+y)=x) = -(x^2)/(x^(2)-1)"

As it was a test over derivatives, I knew I'd have to apply some sort of derivative rule to solve this beast. As I couldn't isolate y, I decided that implicit differentiation would be the best approach. But when I reached what seemed like a dead end in the form of -sin(x+y), I almost gave up. I couldn't simplify any further. 5 min left. I started to worry. Then it hit me.

"What if I draw a triangle?"

Since tangent is opposite over adjacent, the opposite side must equal x and the adjacent is 1. The hypotenuse would then be √(x^2 + 1). Sin(x+y) would then equal x/√(x^2 + 1). Squaring the top and bottom would result in x^(2)/(x^2 + 1). Then add a negative sign because I had negative sin, and there lay my answer. I quickly wrote down the answer and submitted my paper.

The A was a nice gift, but my true reward was the application of other disciplines of mathematics to help reach what seemed like an improbable solution. Never would I have thought that a quick lesson in Pre-Calculus would save my butt and propel me to the top of my class. Our teacher said to think outside the box; how about outside the triangle?

Feedback and thought are very helpful, as English really isn't my strongest subject! Please don't be afraid to be critical as well!
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