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First of all I would like thank everybody for his valuable comments. I am preparing myself for the IELTS and aiming for band 7.is that can consider as band 7

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today`s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Have you decided what you will eat or wear yet? Or even where will you go at the weekend? Do not worry we will decide for you, also we will limit your chooses so, you almost forced to pick up us. This is what advertising made by us today. They are surrounding us in every corner. And I totally agree that this way of advertising is unacceptable and unethical. [....]