Undergraduate / Bursting My Bubble - "Intellectual Vitality" Stanford Supplement [11]

agh your intellectual vitality essay is the cutest! I think it does show what it means to show (in that you had to come up with a new way to teach something--which, really, you shouldn't discount!). I think both your essays have a lot of voice to them; don't second-guess if they're too "flowery" or not--if you're flowery, then so be it!