Posts by chloe224

chloe224

Jul 31, 2014

Letters / motivation letter for re-entry visa to Switzerland [3]

Hi chanya, I have got some suggestions for you and hope these can help you=)
I am a freshmenand I am studying Program Diploma in hospitality management at xxxx , Switzerland.
I have been studying in Switzerland for about 1 year .Studying there really made me become more mature and independent in every perspective.
I have learned some great ~~opportunity of~~experienceswhich may guarantee me to get success in my lifetime career.
I had got the improvement ~~in socializing~~on how to make a relationship with many people and language skills.
~~And~~ I am proud to be a student who is learning hospitality management subjects at xxx , one of the most leading countries in hospitality schools.

Switzerland is one of the ~~world of~~country whichis full of worldwide career opportunities in the world.
I had a great time in both education and society .
Upon I graduated, ~~it is pretty certain that~~which is certainly after 3 years of studying,~~That is done with constant discipline and~~ my passion(better to replace it with ambition) will besuccessas I ~~could~~ have got enough experience ~~enough~~ to lead my family business. In conclusion, I am sure that Switzerland will help me to reach my professional goals.

Thank you.(In letter, we usually use "thank you" for the last paragraph)

chloe224

Jan 19, 2014

Scholarship / "Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics" - NTU essay [6]

thanks=]

chloe224

Jan 12, 2014

Scholarship / "Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics" - NTU essay [6]

Is it better now?=)

"Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics, as one day time will definitely prove that what you believe is that valuable and meaningful", this is a saying which always reminds me. Since I came into secondary school, I decided to challenge myself, which was getting the highest score in math examination in my class. At the beginning, many of my friends laughed at me. They told me not to be naïve as the education in countryside which I came from must not better than cantonal. I neglected them because I think that although we came from different primary schools, we accepted the same education now! I pay all the attention during the math lesson and persevered in finishing all my math homework every day. I also asked teachers when I can't figure out some calculations. After several months, my mathematical skills improved! Finally, I became the most excellent person and always got the highest score in math examination in my class. Critics exist everywhere in our world, no matter they are good or bad for us. We must learn to accept then be consistent in doing what we believe! One day, you will find that your perseverance is worthy.

As the saying, "Honesty is the best policy", we must take honesty as basically value in our life. So, I am never dishonest. For example, while I was checking my answer sheet, I found that my teacher had inadvertently awarded me extra marks in my biology examination. I told my teacher and had the extra marks deducted with regretless. For me, if something is not belonged to me, I shall not obtain.

Base on my value and belief, I am sure I will be studious and persistent in my lessons to let NTU be proud of me.

I only have1 day leave...so, please be quick to give me comments...Thank you very very very much=)

chloe224

Jan 11, 2014

Scholarship / "Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics" - NTU essay [6]

Thank for your advices=)
I will improve myself in grammar=)

chloe224

Jan 8, 2014

Scholarship / "Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics" - NTU essay [6]

Hello,everyone.
I am applying for NTU scholarship.It needs an essay with topic "The Values and Beliefs You Hold Strongly to".
Its whole topic is:Describe, in less than 300 words, the values and beliefs you hold strongly to. Please provide examples of how you have demonstrated these in your actions.

Here is my essay. I hope someone could give me some comments and advice to improve it=)

"Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics, as one day time will definitely prove that what you believe is that valuable and meaningful", this is a saying which always reminds me. Since I came into secondary school, I decided to challenge myself, which is getting the highest score in math examination in my class. At the beginning, many of my friends laughed at me. They told me not to be naïve as the education in countryside which I came from must not better than cantonal. I neglected them as I think that although we came from different primary school but we accepted the same education now! I pay all the attention during the math lesson and persevere in finishing all my math homework every day. I also asked teachers when I can't figure out some calculations. After several months, my mathematical skills improved! At the end, I become the most excellent person and always get the highest score in math examination in my class. Critics exist everywhere in our world, no matter they are good or bad for us. We must learn to accept then be consistent in doing what we believe! One day, you will find that your perseverance is worthy.

As the saying, "Honesty is the best policy". Exactly, honesty is basically value in our life. So, I never be dishonest. For example, while I was checking my answer sheet, I found that my teacher had inadvertently awarded me extra marks in my biology examination. I told my teacher and had the extra marks deducted with regretless. For me, if something is not belonged to me, I shall not obtain.

Base on my value and belief, I am sure I will be studious and persistent in my lessons to let NTU be proud of me.

Please correct me.I need to submit before 15Jan.Thank you=)