shikamaru
Apr 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - why adults decide to study; shared cost of each course [6]
thank you very much for your corrections
thank you very much for your corrections
shikamaru
Mar 31, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - why adults decide to study; shared cost of each course [6]
Yes, you are right. But my exam is on 5 April. So I must improve my skill very quickly. If you have any suggestion or any model answer which like what you said, please let me know.
Yes, you are right. But my exam is on 5 April. So I must improve my skill very quickly. If you have any suggestion or any model answer which like what you said, please let me know.
shikamaru
Mar 31, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - why adults decide to study; shared cost of each course [6]
The chart shows the reason why adults decide to study and the pie chart explains how the cost of each course should be shared. It can be seen that most of the adult choose stduy because of special interest in their subject, last one is for meeting other people.
Major opinions are because of their interest in particullary subject, 40%. Just a little under 40% adults for gaining qualifications. 22% of them get adult education to helpful for their current job. To improve the prospects of promotion and enjoy learning, studying are 1 in 5. To able to change jobs only 12%. Almost the same as to change jobs, 9% decide adult education to meet other people.
Looking at the pie chart we see that 40% people think that each course cost should be shared individually. A quarter of peoples opinion is cost of adult education should be shared taxpayer. And 35% think that all cost should be shared with employers.
The chart shows the reason why adults decide to study and the pie chart explains how the cost of each course should be shared. It can be seen that most of the adult choose stduy because of special interest in their subject, last one is for meeting other people.
Major opinions are because of their interest in particullary subject, 40%. Just a little under 40% adults for gaining qualifications. 22% of them get adult education to helpful for their current job. To improve the prospects of promotion and enjoy learning, studying are 1 in 5. To able to change jobs only 12%. Almost the same as to change jobs, 9% decide adult education to meet other people.
Looking at the pie chart we see that 40% people think that each course cost should be shared individually. A quarter of peoples opinion is cost of adult education should be shared taxpayer. And 35% think that all cost should be shared with employers.
