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Name: Dedi Rustandi
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May 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 : Process (Tea Production) [7]

Wow...wonderful feedbacks. I did it in simulated condition in 20 minutes. Sometimes, I did not realize small mistakes. Btw, i do really need more practices, then. Thank you for your feedback.
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May 21, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 : Process (Tea Production) [7]

The picture ilustrates the process starting from the beginning to the final product, that is a cup of tea. It can be seen that the process is quite simple and does not need heavy or complicated equipment, however, it needs many stages, which can be divided into two groups of stages.

Firstly, the farmers should decide the right place for growing tea. The cold place like India and China is the most appropiate place for that. Then tea seeds are sowed and kept continuously in sunshine condition. The next stage is collecting the tea leaves, which is dried first prior to packing and distribution. Afterwards, they are brought and taken home by customers.

At home, to make a cup of tea, the water is boilt up and mixed immediately with tea bag. Then, the drinking tea needs to leave for two minutes. Finally, a cup of tea is produced and it can be added with milk and sugar if necessary.



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