Undergraduate / "I didn't deserve it" - GREATEST ACCOMPLISHMENT! [3]

PROMPT: Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.

* I am having real debates about this essay but because I am going in with a dependency override I think It would be to my best advantage.

* Please be critical! Don't hold anything back, I did not go into extreme detail about my situation but merely alluded to what troubles me!

* Look for grammatical errors PLZ! I am horrible with my grammar.
* Thank you!!

In my Junior year of high school I was presented with a question that asked what my greatest accomplishment thus far was. At the time I found myself conflicted with how to approach such a question. I have always been the kid in the bleaches when it came to sports. So athletics were out. I am a pretty standard student, nothing incredible about my intelligence. Nor is my life comprised of medals and certificates for extraordinary feats. Today though I answer that I am most proud of surviving all that came with coming out.

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