Undergraduate / to persuade the parent to give freedom to their children in determining their own future [2]

i really need help, please correct me if im wrong. this essay deadline is 29/8. i think i make a lot of mistake but i seem doknow where is it?

A very good morning to the director of IPG kampus ipoh, respectable lecturers and my fellow friends. I am glad to be given this golden chance to give a speech today and I would to talk about a concerning issue happen in our community lately. My speech tittle is 'Children's Freedom In Choosing Their Own Future'. Every child whether a boy or girl irrespective of age is unique and has value importance as a person with a right for their human dignity to be respected. It has a right to have a say in all decisions and matters that concern him or her, to be listened to and his or her opinion taken seriously

Freedom is meant by someone that can do whatever they want in their life but to children letting them decide their future is enough to be called as freedom. Lately, many parents not letting their children to decide their own future as they thought their children are still not ready no make such big decision. So some of them take an action by completely take over their children's life. Children need to obey with their parent 's choice without have chance to explain themselves. They want their children to be a pilot,doctor and any future occupations they want .Parents should bear in mind that no one know about children better than themself. They know what they good and bad in which parents may not know as well as them.They independent enough to make such dicision .So why not letting them choose?.

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On the other hand, all the children in this world have their own interest and forcing them doing what we like is not a good idea. What parents like does not mean children will like it too. For example if they had problem in studies,I am sure that they will not give their best effort on solving the particular problem .They tend to act like they don t care about it at all. As result their grade will fell down and their chance to be kicked out from university is high.This could lead them to stress and protest against parent. As a parents, it our duty to listen to the children and to consider their opinions when the decision. We should show them such a big support to encourage them in becoming a better humanbeings.Remember that children also have their own interest. So, children of today should be given freedom for their own benefits.

Apart from that, Maturity is the ability to think, speak and act your feelings within the bounds of dignity. The measure of your maturity is how spiritual you become during the midst of your frustrations.Children should prove to parents that they are matured enough, reliable and trustworthy before they could get their freedom. I personally think it is acceptable that parents can control their own children but be sure not to treat them like they did not know between good or bad .Children need to show to their parent that what their believe .Every children has the right to express themselves. As they mature through the years,they access more deeply information they had only abstractly understood it before.

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As conclusion.children have a right to participate in decisions that shape their life and therefore should be given a chance to express their own opinion. However, this right is only exercised considering the maturity and the best interest of the child. Not all decisions that a child makes will be supported by their parents or guardians

Writing Feedback / Writing is one of the things I used to hate the most - My first Reflective essay [2]

This my first time writting reflective essay. i also make lot of grammer n spelling error. please help me.i no that i was no good in writing

Reflective essay

Writing is one of the things I used to hate the most because I usually made a lot of spelling error. I hate it when teachers would ask me to write one. I know that I was not good in writing but still I have to complete the task. I remember Mr Subra my english lecturer would say like this ' who am i to say no '. But now thing started to changed as I entered IPG Kampus Ipoh.

Regarding my coursework I enjoyed myself when performing this task eventhough there are some obstacles that I had to face .First problem I faced was lack of team work,I know we majored in Remedial and and some of us were really bad in english. But we tried to help each other as team that what team for and as the saying two head is better than one. We ought to find a suitable time for us to discuss about the topic and it really hard with our tight schedule.But we manage to sit together and discussing about it. We came out with a few idea but still it was not good enough for A result. So we seeked help from other 's class who major in english and It was paid off to ask them. They were really helpfuland kind to us

Besides, the time given was barely enough for me to do some reading and researches about the topic . To say it frankly i was really exhausted to some reasearch in library which is take me 12 minutes walking to get there.I think more time should be given as we are new in this field and this will not be a problem when I am used to this kind of task in the future.So time is do matter to me.

Apart from that, from this task i learned that children should be given freedom to make their own decisions for their future.I personnaly think that parents rightly need to give more supports to their children 's interest instead to force doing what we like.It does not matter how good our choice is ,if the children is not interested they not give put their effort into it. I also learned that children also have rights and liberties like adults.

On top of that, by giving childen chance to determine their future it helps them matured. In this era which the world has become more challenging, it help children gained valuable experience. In this way,children will know how to manage their own life and they will learns how to solve any problems witout relay on others.That the thing I learned ,giving children chance to decide their future help them matured .

In a nut shell,parent should let their children deteremined their on future because they have right to choose for their future .Parents should to support their children interest not force them doing what we like because it always end bad for two sides.It all depend on us,as parents to handle such situation.