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vandon92

Sep 15, 2014

Writing Feedback / IELTS Writting task 1: UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. [7]

Hi! Thank you very much for your explanation. I'm just a newbie in IELTS exam and this is one of the homework the tutor gave me. I heard that in the real exam, the writting task 1 would contain about 2 or more graphs like this one. So i wonder how much word i should spend on each graph in order to make my essay look good ?

vandon92

Sep 15, 2014

Writing Feedback / IELTS Writting task 1: UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. [7]

Please help me check this. Thank you very much!
The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescants following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph illustrates the proportion of young peoples in UK taking part in a vegetarian diet, from 1960 to 2020. Overall, it can be seen that figure fluctuated over the period, but the trend was still upward. Started at 0% in 1960, the percentage accerelated and reached its highest level of slightly more than 15% in 1980, and this was also the highest peak over the period. Afterward, there was a significant drop in the percentage of UK vegetarian juvenile, from over 15% to nearly 7%. The figure then moved up and down wildly before recovered gradually by around 10% in 2012. Subsequently, the percentage was fairly stable at 12% in 2020.