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Posts by Catie Pak
Name: Catie Pak
Joined: Sep 22, 2014
Last Post: Sep 23, 2014
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From: Russian Federation
School: Secondary School no17

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Catie Pak   
Sep 23, 2014
Writing Feedback / My Best Friend - I met her at "Young Pianist" Contest [5]

I completely agree with you. Thank you for your recommendations. I'll consider your advices when I'll write the following essay. Unfortunately, I couldn't write more about our friendship with Nadya because the task was to write an essay which consist of only 200-250 words.

Thank you again. You really helped me a lot :)
Catie Pak   
Sep 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / My Best Friend - I met her at "Young Pianist" Contest [5]

Hello I'm from Russia. I've been learning English for 2 years. Please help me to improve my writing skills. Thank you so much in advance :)

Nadya has been my close friend for four years. We first met each other at the third International Contest which is called "Young Pianist". She came to Podolsk from Kazakhstan, Karaganda to take part in it as I did. I met a lot of good people there. But with Nadya I spent more time than anyone else. From that day we became friends.

Nadya is a lovely girl of eighteen. She is tall and skinny. She has straight, long hair. Nadya is pale-skinned and her light brown eyes are so lively. She usually wears casual clothes, but sometimes you can see her in beautiful dresses and skirts.

Nadya has a very kind-hearted personality. She is always ready to help her friends and relatives. Moreover, she is well-mannered and polite. In spite of this, Nadya is stubborn sometimes. But I think it's a good trait of her character because she always pursues the goals.

Nadya likes to travel. She hopes she can visit all the countries in the world. Nadya also writes great poems. She brings out the best in me by being so optimistic and ambitious. She believes in herself and often makes me smile. Nadya loves children and to play with them. She has been dreaming to become a primary school teacher since the childhood. Her dream has come true this year. She has successfully finished school and entered the university.

Nadya is a great and devoted friend. I hope our friendship will never end.
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