Undergraduate / I have always dreamed about studying something which is related with humans beings; applying letter [11]

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Undergraduate / I have always dreamed about studying something which is related with humans beings; applying letter [11]

I hope this one is better :)

It was said a few years ago that if the human race is wiped out in the next 50 years it will not be because of disease or an asteroid hitting the earth, but because of foreign policy and international relations. In a world where thousand of people die each day from poverty and where thousand of weapons exist and more countries are trying to acquire them, I feel the need to know and understand how the internationals relations works, and once I achieved it, I would help to improve them. After deciding that what I wanted to study was International Relations, I focused my search on foreign universities, as languages are an important key in the international field. When I came across AUC, I realized that was all I was looking for: a education quality, cultural diversity, location and the opportunity to be heard and understood.

AUC gives me the chance to improve my English under the direction of renowned professionals and adopted an international perspective. AUC also unable me to learn arabic language and experience a culture and a way of living different from my country, what I am sure that will allow me to grow in both ways, professional and personal. As I believe, having the widest possible knowledge about different cultures allows you to understand diverse points of view, an important factor to cultivate peace. Also it encourages the exchange of ideas which will be very useful in the future. I few words, AUC promotes the cultural exchange uniting in one place the West, the East, and students from all over the world, and that it is what makes AUC unique.

Another fact that helps me to chose the AUC was its musical program. Not every universities have one, and it really fascinated me. I have been playing the violin since I was a child and I wouldn't like to give it up. I consider music as a universal language, which has the capacity to express mans' deepest emotion. Music through its ability to transcend boundaries can thus create relationships between people from different backgrounds and opposing beliefs, what is one of the International Relations main idea.

In conclusion,my choice was not base on superficial reasons, but on real important ones. I expressed my main reasons, even though I have no enough words to describe my enthusiasm to study at the AUC. An outstanding education, a fascinating culture variety and a productive and creative atmosphere which allows me to achieve my goals and be prepared to jump to the International Relations field.

Undergraduate / I have always dreamed about studying something which is related with humans beings; applying letter [11]

Well, I have tried to do it better. :)

From an early age, I have dreamed about studying something related with human beings and the environment we are living in. I don't know why but I have always got a feeling in my inner about what was going on around me, so when I got older I was quiet concern that I wanted to study International Relations. Then I focused my search on foreign universities, as languages are an important key in the international field. Also, I was looking for an education quality, cultural diversity, location and fortunately I find all of this in the American University in Cairo. I see the AUC as the right way to develop myself as a person and what is more to get the right knowledge to be able to help this society we are living in.

AUC gives me the chance to improve my English and at the same time it unable me to learn arabic language and experience a culture and a way of living different from my country. I think that learning a language is learning a culture, and everything together will help me to get to know both, american and arabic society, and all of this In a few words the AUC has something that the others lack of, and what is it? The AUC gets together two different cultures in the same place.

I have always been interested into arabic world, owing that my father is Lebanese and I would like to understand their way of living and thinking and being here living with them I would be able to get to know them much better. I am fairly sure that the AUC is the right place for helping me to grow and providing me a great knowledge, not only arabian world but also western one. As far as I know, the AUC offers you special opportunities that allow students to participate in extracurricular activities and student-run conferences.

Another fact that helps me to chose the AUC was its musical program. I am really fascinated by it. I couldn't believe it because it will allow me to keep on playing my violin. I have been playing it since I was a child and I wouldn't like to give it up as I consider it a very important part of my life I believe that it can help me in a near future to develop some skills.

In conclusion, I think that is the ability to choose well what makes us special and determines our future and I am sure that AUC would be the best option for being such a great international renowned university, with an outstanding education system. In the AUC I will be able to be the best of myself and to achieve my goals, living in Egypt, an amazing country and learning in the American way, which is known to be one of the best in the area of the International Relations. It would be a honour for me to be a part of this great university.

Undergraduate / I have always dreamed about studying something which is related with humans beings; applying letter [11]

First of all thank you for your response, it is very helpful!
Well, they ask me to write an essay of what can AUC offer to me, and they don't give me more information.

Undergraduate / I have always dreamed about studying something which is related with humans beings; applying letter [11]

oh! Thank you very much tgholian. It is very helpful!
But do you think that the arguments are good?
Thank you again.