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Oct 25, 2014
Graduate / Issue 108/110; Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless.. [3]

of science and philosophy, where rational reasoning and thinking are urgent in research, accumulation in one specific area is criti

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In the contemporary era of rapid social and technological change leading to increased complexity in every single aspect of any area, critical judgment from professional or amateur perspectives is now facing both appreciation and challenge. Any conclusion may fall into biased if it is examined with absolutization, so is the value of judgment, which, at least, should be separately examined in science or in art. With the speedy development of science, most people in the area of scientific research are now focusing on only one spot, which lead to that people from outside can barely judge the work critically. On the other hand, those areas of art, which based its life resource from the spirit of human beings are able to call for critical judgment by someone may not be in an area of art but still have the mind for appreciation of beauty.

In the area of science, progression only comes from those experts who have devoted literally countless time and energy into a specific study area for the reason that accumulated knowledge not only brought a professional background but also inspire creative activities. However, people may argue that those judgments from outsiders may have significant values for they have brought a new perspective to a specific area which may be inspiring! But when we deeply review history we cannot find any actual events in which outsiders contribute greatly to a specific scientific area. Those revolutionary findings only come from the experts in one area, who have possessed and absorbed pre-existing nutrition. If Newton did not study those pre-existing mathematics theories, it would be impossible for him to calculate the laws of motion and can never conclude the theory of gravity. If Russell, the greatest philosophy in the 20th century, did not examine pre-existing philosophical books and thoughts, he would never be able to finish the masterpiece of the history of western philosophy, in which he critically judged and appreciated the story and the historical value of the former philosophy. So it should be safe to say that in the area of science and philosophy, where rational reasoning and thinking are urgent in research, accumulation in one specific area is critical. Therefore, critical judgment may contribute to vain if it comes from people who are totally out of that area.

In the area of art, where creative thoughts come from the nature of human beings' spirit and appreciation of beauty, the judgment may still have great value if it comes from outsiders or even from young generation without much experience. People may argue that the practice may be most necessary merit in the development of art and therefore only people who are experts and have spent so much time in practice and have already been famous could be able to find the flaws and appraising a piece of art.

However, the history of art simply demonstrates a large volume of revolution comes from numerous people who were relatively young. Beethoven finished his masterpiece in his twenties. He disdained the main form of musicians in his time and he creatively combined the dramatic classic style of lively contrasts and symmetrical forms. These works helped Beethoven give voice to the new current of subjectivity and sing praises of Enlightenment, an 18th century movement that promoted the ideals of freedom and equality.

In the final analysis, the value of judgment should be deliberately examined in different circumstances, as there has never existed one simple rule but fitting everywhere.
shabemahtab   
Oct 24, 2014
Writing Feedback / Others advices and personal experience should co-exist to assist person reach success [2]

Generally, knowledge about life can be earned from various sources that all of them can be classified as two main groups: external resources and internal experiences. The major topic I will address in this essay is drawing a distinction between benefits of these two groups, and answering to this question that which of them more beneficial.

First and foremost, a major part of our knowledge is based on information we have got from our family and friends. This kind of awareness has these advantages that it usually takes less energy, time, and money of us; and is easier and effortless. By way of illustration, I remember about two years ago, I had to take a great exam, called national entrance exam of the universities that is held one time per year. Failure at this exam means that you will should wait until the next year exam to take it again. Furthermore, passing this exam is the only way of entering to the universities. First, I thought that I can get successful without help of others; However, since the penalty of failing in this test was wasting of one year time, I asked my friends who had the experience of this test, and they told me that what matterial would be better if I read, how make a program for myself in studying, and how be comfortable in the test day. As you have seen, my friends taught me lessons that were very helpful and invaluable, and if I wanted to obtain these experiences myself, probably I should devote a year time!!

However, sometimes listening to others advices will not help as personal experience can help, specially, when it relates to someones emotions. As an example, I remember about seven years ago, when I was a high school student, I was alone at home with my mother. Suddenly, I saw that she was very sick and could not even speak well. At that time I started to cry while my mother was getting worst. Fortunately, one of our neighbors arrived. She rapidly took a taxi and took my mother to the hospital. As a matter of fact, she rescued my mother, and taught me that in difficult situations, instead of crying and being emotionally destroyed, we should think about the best remedy to get released of the problem. Before that time, I had heard many times that what should I do at severe occasions but after that personal experience I deeply learned the lesson.

As you have seen in the previous paragraphs, both of others advices and personal experience are useful and helpful. Although the first one can be gained easier and includes a great deal of knowledge, the second one is necessary in some special occasions. In my perspective, both of them should exist to assist person reach success.
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