Posts by senpenguin

senpenguin

Oct 30, 2014

Undergraduate / 'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay [6]

I just remembered an anecdote that would connect architecture and my desire for liberal arts! (with your help) Thanks so much. I think I've got it figured out from here on out.

Thanks again,
John

senpenguin

Oct 30, 2014

Undergraduate / 'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay [6]

But then again, I'm not sure what I want to study, just that it's in the engineering(ish) field, so I guess bringing in a possibility of architecture definitely doesn't hurt.

senpenguin

Oct 30, 2014

Undergraduate / 'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay [6]

I'm not... Is that bad? It's just a feature that really stood out to me and made me feel comfortable immediately. Also, just to clarify, are you recommending I still keep everything else, or just that paragraph and expand on it? I ask because I felt that the organization/transition between paragraphs were a little rough; it felt like three separate ideas without necessarily a connection between them. Is that alright or should I just keep and expand on one reason?

Thanks so much,
John

P.S. anyone feel free to answer. With the looming deadline, I'd really appreciate any feedback ASAP

senpenguin

Oct 29, 2014

Undergraduate / 'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay [6]

Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why. (300 words or less)

This is a very early rough draft of my Columbia essay. Can I get some suggestions before I move forward with this idea? Do you think its allowed to use more than one reason?

Thanks

New York City, the City that never sleeps, is filled with life and energy consistent with my perpetual academic curiosities. Countless resources, landmarks, and opportunities are only a short subway ride's reach away. Whether I'm visiting the countless museums or interning at Google's New York City headquarters, there are limitless possibilities to explore in a city so diverse and colorful.

When I first set foot on Columbia's stunning campus last summer, I immediately felt at home. The Greek amphitheater and classical architecture described in the Roman literature I read in Latin class came to life in front of my eyes. I could see myself sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library. I could see myself attending concerts in Low Plaza. (Not finished with this paragraph)

Columbia's unique take on education cannot be found anywhere else in the world. Columbia's 3-2 program offers an unparalleled education in both liberal arts and engineering, allowing me to not only study engineering but also become knowledgeable and informed in a variety of disciplines. Consequentially, Columbia University will prepare me for a future beyond engineering itself, a more impactful future as a leader, entrepreneur, and scholar.