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Nov 27, 2014
Undergraduate / UC essay prompt #1 on inspired by family background [2]

I have lived under my parent's protection for my entire life that I seldom made decisions for myself. During high school, I convinced my parents to allow me to take a gap year and join the Rotary Youth Exchange Program. This integral experience shaped me into an independent, confident, and determined individual.

I have lived under my parent's protection for my entire life that I seldom made decisions for myself [what was the effect of this? "Therefore, I lacked the.. needed to .. As a result, I joined the.. " etc.]. During high school, I convinced my parents to allow me to take a gap year and join the Rotary Youth Exchange Program. This integral experience shaped me into an independent, confident, and determined individual [how so? "predominantly through.."]
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