Saruch
Dec 23, 2014
Undergraduate / CMC Supplement: What influence you most in you decision to apply to CMC? [2]
Prompt: What influence you most in you decision to apply to CMC? Please limit your response to no more than 200 words
I need some help to cut the words down to 200 (it currently stands at 205)
Any feedback will be appreciated!
Leave a comment and I would love to help out with yours too :) Thank you all!
My hesitation for college officially ended with a LinkedIn conversation I had by the occasion of my internship.
Alumnus BLANK talked to me about the California sunshine, the cooking club, and the intellectually stimulating conversations she had at the Athenaeum... When I mentioned my passions for psychology and international relations, she even sent a list of programs for my reference. Alongside maximum freedom for interdisciplinary studies, the plethora of activities like "MUN" and off-campus programs like "Brazil: Social Justice and Sustainable Development" will empower me to obtain intellectual breadth and pragmatic skills in tackling real-life challenges of greater society.
It's incredible how much help she'd offer to someone she just met via internet. And the only secret code needed to reach out, is "CMC".
"4 years in CMC were the most cherished time of my life." She told me so. Upon that point, I felt besides the tradition of excellence, CMC has the magic that makes one so ebullient about her school decades after graduation, and eager to light directions for the laters. I've longed for such a place where pursuit for greatness integrates effortlessly with an accessible and supportive atmosphere.
No hesitation is ever needed, and the decision was made.
Prompt: What influence you most in you decision to apply to CMC? Please limit your response to no more than 200 words
I need some help to cut the words down to 200 (it currently stands at 205)
Any feedback will be appreciated!
Leave a comment and I would love to help out with yours too :) Thank you all!
My hesitation for college officially ended with a LinkedIn conversation I had by the occasion of my internship.
Alumnus BLANK talked to me about the California sunshine, the cooking club, and the intellectually stimulating conversations she had at the Athenaeum... When I mentioned my passions for psychology and international relations, she even sent a list of programs for my reference. Alongside maximum freedom for interdisciplinary studies, the plethora of activities like "MUN" and off-campus programs like "Brazil: Social Justice and Sustainable Development" will empower me to obtain intellectual breadth and pragmatic skills in tackling real-life challenges of greater society.
It's incredible how much help she'd offer to someone she just met via internet. And the only secret code needed to reach out, is "CMC".
"4 years in CMC were the most cherished time of my life." She told me so. Upon that point, I felt besides the tradition of excellence, CMC has the magic that makes one so ebullient about her school decades after graduation, and eager to light directions for the laters. I've longed for such a place where pursuit for greatness integrates effortlessly with an accessible and supportive atmosphere.
No hesitation is ever needed, and the decision was made.
