borzou27
Jul 14, 2009
Writing Feedback / General Ielts: Governments should encourage employers to choose young people? [7]
Dear john.
You are absolutly right.
Tanx.
Dear john.
You are absolutly right.
Tanx.
borzou27
Jul 13, 2009
Writing Feedback / General Ielts: Governments should encourage employers to choose young people? [7]
thanx for your advice, I changed it to "Some people argue that"
thanx for your advice, I changed it to "Some people argue that"
borzou27
Jul 13, 2009
Writing Feedback / General Ielts: Governments should encourage employers to choose young people? [7]
As a matter of fact, the majority of companies these days do not respect to young Beginner people's rights and talents and rarely give them opportunity to being employee. In this case, I absolutely agree with governments should force companies to use young people even they are tenderfoot otherwise, several problems makes by just simple issue!
Firstly the fact of the matter is that most important government's duties is protecting their people at least by prepares their foods, jobs and securities but if they ignore the young and inexperience's rights, who would be protect them? Government should support and inspirit companies use the young people abilities to avoid of increasing joblessness and makes them ready to use of their abilities for future in more important job situations.
Secondly Young people aspects government to prepare their gob after graduate and this is their aims of studying and if they neglected by their society maybe they should never try to graduate as soon as they can and our society were into less graduate.
Thirdly some expert believe that specially young joblessness people increase crimes rates in societies and if government what to decline felonies they absolutely shall decrease their jobless people amount bye provide much more job's opportunities specially for young and experience less people.
For these reasons ,I tend to agree with this view that it is kind of government duty to encourage and even force the companies to choose young people for their employing plans to avoid of increasing joblessness and makes students hopeful about their future.
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Please write your advices to me.
Thanks in advance.
As a matter of fact, the majority of companies these days do not respect to young Beginner people's rights and talents and rarely give them opportunity to being employee. In this case, I absolutely agree with governments should force companies to use young people even they are tenderfoot otherwise, several problems makes by just simple issue!
Firstly the fact of the matter is that most important government's duties is protecting their people at least by prepares their foods, jobs and securities but if they ignore the young and inexperience's rights, who would be protect them? Government should support and inspirit companies use the young people abilities to avoid of increasing joblessness and makes them ready to use of their abilities for future in more important job situations.
Secondly Young people aspects government to prepare their gob after graduate and this is their aims of studying and if they neglected by their society maybe they should never try to graduate as soon as they can and our society were into less graduate.
Thirdly some expert believe that specially young joblessness people increase crimes rates in societies and if government what to decline felonies they absolutely shall decrease their jobless people amount bye provide much more job's opportunities specially for young and experience less people.
For these reasons ,I tend to agree with this view that it is kind of government duty to encourage and even force the companies to choose young people for their employing plans to avoid of increasing joblessness and makes students hopeful about their future.
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Please write your advices to me.
Thanks in advance.
