purpleperidot
Jan 29, 2015
Writing Feedback / Gem cannot be polished nor man perfected [3]
Thank you. I am grateful for your feedback.
Thank you. I am grateful for your feedback.
purpleperidot
Jan 24, 2015
Writing Feedback / Gem cannot be polished nor man perfected [3]
My topic is The gem cannot be polished without friction nor man perfected without trials and I have to write between 300-400 words.
The process is long and arduous and when the gem is finally dug out, all that can be seen is something raw and unfinished. With it's sharp edges, the gem does not seem like something that can be of value. There are still many more processes that it must undergo before it is approved and in order to attain perfection, it must be polished and cut and shaved until it becomes that little shiny object that catches every woman's eye.
Man is the same. In order to become the perfect object adored by many and to be the model human he must undergo certain trials and tribulations. It may hurt initially but thinking about it's end product is most satisfying. To build character he has to have experienced situations to make him a better, bigger and wiser person.
It is said that the most kind and loving people are those who were hurt the most. If we assume that this is true then it must mean that in order to become the most kind, loving and generous people you would have to experience some harsh realities. Emotions that run through you when you are experiencing tough times or even good times will always remain with you no matter what, so you will always remember what it was like for you to be in a particular situation when you see someone in that same situation. This is what will make you respond in a kindly manner.
Difficulties makes you a much stronger, wiser person which in turn would definitely turn you in an almost perfect human being. So it is true that in order to become perfect and to be that small shining person with exemplary character, you must go through many different trials.
My topic is The gem cannot be polished without friction nor man perfected without trials and I have to write between 300-400 words.
The process is long and arduous and when the gem is finally dug out, all that can be seen is something raw and unfinished. With it's sharp edges, the gem does not seem like something that can be of value. There are still many more processes that it must undergo before it is approved and in order to attain perfection, it must be polished and cut and shaved until it becomes that little shiny object that catches every woman's eye.
Man is the same. In order to become the perfect object adored by many and to be the model human he must undergo certain trials and tribulations. It may hurt initially but thinking about it's end product is most satisfying. To build character he has to have experienced situations to make him a better, bigger and wiser person.
It is said that the most kind and loving people are those who were hurt the most. If we assume that this is true then it must mean that in order to become the most kind, loving and generous people you would have to experience some harsh realities. Emotions that run through you when you are experiencing tough times or even good times will always remain with you no matter what, so you will always remember what it was like for you to be in a particular situation when you see someone in that same situation. This is what will make you respond in a kindly manner.
Difficulties makes you a much stronger, wiser person which in turn would definitely turn you in an almost perfect human being. So it is true that in order to become perfect and to be that small shining person with exemplary character, you must go through many different trials.
