Undergraduate / FROM 4 LEGS TO 2! How Veterinary medicine led me to Nursing. [3]

I would be honored if anyone could take the time to read this draft of my nursing program personal statement. All feedback is greatly appreciated. I am especially unsure about the intro and conclusion.

The instructions are as follows:
Two-page Personal Statement, double spaced
Outline your professional goals and the reasons you wish to pursue the degree

I didn't always know what I wanted to do; growing up. Nursing was the farthest thing from my mind. I spent some time planning on becoming a teacher; mostly because I knew I could do it well.

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