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Posts by AndhineYellouw
Name: Andini Pratiwi
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AndhineYellouw   
Apr 8, 2015
Grammar, Usage / 1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge' - Grammar correction in sentences [5]

Dear Icturn87,

Actually I wanted to post my all essay, however it's my consideration just to keep 'em.

1. Thank you for your advise. It is true that I wanted to use past tense. I will attempt to re arrange the sentence according to your advise.

2. Actually, I was Biology student and there is genetics subject as a part of Biology (besides Microbiology, Biochemistry subject, etc). Genetics was my favourite one. So, is it fine to use "the study of genetics"? As I was not Genetics major but Biology. Pls advise.

3. Okay. Thank you for your advise.

4. Yes I do. However, that wishes was in my past. I meant to express my past wishes by using "wished" through work and discover the cause of many diseases. Pls kindly advise how I suppose to write in a proper way?

5. Yes I did. That wishes was in my past also. Pls advise.

6. Thank you for your advise.
7. Thank you for your advise.

8. No, they didn't. I, myself who did it. Actually, I have had experience as a Public Health workforce in the leaving area when I was in the college. Through this activity, I've got knowledge about it. So I expressed it like "It had introduced me about the importance of encouraging healthy behaviours to people". Is it correct?

9. Thank you for your advise.
10. Thank you for your advise.
11. Thank you for your advise.

12. Yes true, I wanted to express that way :) Thank you for your advise.
AndhineYellouw   
Apr 8, 2015
Grammar, Usage / 1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge' - Grammar correction in sentences [5]

Dear Ransom2092,

Thank you so much for helping.

1. I use "had" because I want to state the past situation. Biology was my previous education. So, is it fine to use "had" instead of "has" ? Pls advise:)

However according to Icturn87, I should say "gave" to describe condition in the past. Biology gave me the fundamental knowledge about the complexity of biological system.

2. Thank you for your advise.
3. Thank you for your advise.

4. I wrote "wished" because I want to state situation in the past. My wish in the past-> wished??
So according to you, it become I wished to discover the cause of as many diseases as possible. Is it correct?

5. Thank you for your advise.
6. Thank you for your advise.
7. Thank you for your advise.
8. Thank you for your advise.
9-12. Thank you for your advise.
AndhineYellouw   
Apr 7, 2015
Writing Feedback / Learning about foreign countries by watching and travelling [3]

I definitely agree, although in few situations I could learn more about foreign phrases, sentences or words by only watching them regularly.
Besides the original language, thing that makes difference between just watching and visiting is the common people's habit in specific area, for an easy example like hugging as a "thank you" word, kissing beloved lips in unclosed room, etc.
AndhineYellouw   
Apr 7, 2015
Grammar, Usage / 1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge' - Grammar correction in sentences [5]

Dear all,

I am writing essay for scholarship, but I thought there are some confusing sentences which grammatically incorrect. Kindly help me to check pleasee :) Thanks alot, it means so much to me.

1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge about[/i] the complexity of biological systems
2. I decided to focus on genetics subject [i]which interest me most. By learning it, I had knowledge
and then put more attention to diseases affected by genetics mutation.

3. work closely in health areas like working in the laboratorium or hospital.
4. I wished by working and also discovering the cause of many diseases
5. to work in health field strongly arised
6. At the time I was accompanying my mother at the hospital
7. I have had experience as a
8. had introduced me about the importance on encouraging healthy behaviours of people
9. To implementthese idea, I suggested to make wall magazine
10. Every activities we'd do needed a funding source routinely, it was included in publishing wall magazine weekly.
11. I invited other members to participate on music activity which we called ngamen,
12. that this kind of event would lead us to unite deeply in togetherness; and moreover in achieveing the same goal, get the financial source
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