AndhineYellouw
Apr 8, 2015
Grammar, Usage / 1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge' - Grammar correction in sentences [5]
Dear Icturn87,
Actually I wanted to post my all essay, however it's my consideration just to keep 'em.
1. Thank you for your advise. It is true that I wanted to use past tense. I will attempt to re arrange the sentence according to your advise.
2. Actually, I was Biology student and there is genetics subject as a part of Biology (besides Microbiology, Biochemistry subject, etc). Genetics was my favourite one. So, is it fine to use "the study of genetics"? As I was not Genetics major but Biology. Pls advise.
3. Okay. Thank you for your advise.
4. Yes I do. However, that wishes was in my past. I meant to express my past wishes by using "wished" through work and discover the cause of many diseases. Pls kindly advise how I suppose to write in a proper way?
5. Yes I did. That wishes was in my past also. Pls advise.
6. Thank you for your advise.
7. Thank you for your advise.
8. No, they didn't. I, myself who did it. Actually, I have had experience as a Public Health workforce in the leaving area when I was in the college. Through this activity, I've got knowledge about it. So I expressed it like "It had introduced me about the importance of encouraging healthy behaviours to people". Is it correct?
9. Thank you for your advise.
10. Thank you for your advise.
11. Thank you for your advise.
12. Yes true, I wanted to express that way :) Thank you for your advise.
Dear Icturn87,
Actually I wanted to post my all essay, however it's my consideration just to keep 'em.
1. Thank you for your advise. It is true that I wanted to use past tense. I will attempt to re arrange the sentence according to your advise.
2. Actually, I was Biology student and there is genetics subject as a part of Biology (besides Microbiology, Biochemistry subject, etc). Genetics was my favourite one. So, is it fine to use "the study of genetics"? As I was not Genetics major but Biology. Pls advise.
3. Okay. Thank you for your advise.
4. Yes I do. However, that wishes was in my past. I meant to express my past wishes by using "wished" through work and discover the cause of many diseases. Pls kindly advise how I suppose to write in a proper way?
5. Yes I did. That wishes was in my past also. Pls advise.
6. Thank you for your advise.
7. Thank you for your advise.
8. No, they didn't. I, myself who did it. Actually, I have had experience as a Public Health workforce in the leaving area when I was in the college. Through this activity, I've got knowledge about it. So I expressed it like "It had introduced me about the importance of encouraging healthy behaviours to people". Is it correct?
9. Thank you for your advise.
10. Thank you for your advise.
11. Thank you for your advise.
12. Yes true, I wanted to express that way :) Thank you for your advise.