Speeches / Punished life - Introduction to my speech [3]

Hi everyone, can you help me I'm trying to fix my introduction to my speech and I think I'm lost I'm still working on the body of speech. It's persuassive speech.

Thank you so much in advance.

Imagine having a life where you get punished for leaving the house without a male companion, for being alone with an unrelated man, or for undergoing certain medical procedures without permission from male guardians. [...]