Posts by Ammar Ansari
Name: Ammar Ansari
Joined: Mar 28, 2015 |
Last Post: Mar 31, 2015
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Ammar Ansari Mar 31, 2015
Graduate /
Reason for applying Global Leaders Program. 'Learning is a never ending process'. [5]
Seems legitimate
I am still weak at grammar so concern other people before sending it .
Only problem I could see wad
After graduating
my Bachelor Degree what else can you graduate from it seems like a repetition.It should be like
After graduating, I switched the company
Even if you want to add it use Bachelor program rather than Bachelor degree.
If you feel my feedback helpful do like it so that I can also get help on my topics
Ammar Ansari Mar 30, 2015
Graduate /
Reason for applying Global Leaders Program. 'Learning is a never ending process'. [5]
I don't know a lot about English grammar but being a recruiter I have edited the thing that annoy me the most. I had given some recommendations hope you like them.Learning is a never ending process, more over related to the importance of developing human resources ...
An abrupt change both paragraph don't coordinate with each other. Add some point showing importance of Computer Science. Ammar Ansari Mar 28, 2015
Scholarship /
As computers are being used more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in classroom [2]
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.It is totally acceptable that with the invention of computers learning process has completely changed. Although computer have its pros and cons like searching and understanding information has been easier and faster but contrary to that we have lost our skills that could only be taught by a human. According to me Computers should be used as a mode of education but they cannot take place of teachers.
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