Erin W
May 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / Ghoulish House Description [4]
In our class we had to write a description of a haunted house. This is my piece of work.
A cold, entrancing house looms in front of me. Barren, deserted land surrounds what was once a majestic home, and is now an abandoned ghost town. An iron gate cries and wails behind my frozen body as my eyes explore this haunted monstrosity. In a former life, this structure was a place for the wealthy and fortunate, now left to crumble away. Decaying paint peels off the walls, leaving rotting spits on the paintwork. Shattered glass lies around me , and destroyed windows tower above. A single movement of the trees sends a shower of bats up into the night sky. Wind howls around he body, making it creak and groan. Bare trees are knocked around with the powerful force, leaving them bent and close to collapsing on the ground. Once a dream house, now only inhabitable by the supernatural.
In our class we had to write a description of a haunted house. This is my piece of work.
A cold, entrancing house looms in front of me. Barren, deserted land surrounds what was once a majestic home, and is now an abandoned ghost town. An iron gate cries and wails behind my frozen body as my eyes explore this haunted monstrosity. In a former life, this structure was a place for the wealthy and fortunate, now left to crumble away. Decaying paint peels off the walls, leaving rotting spits on the paintwork. Shattered glass lies around me , and destroyed windows tower above. A single movement of the trees sends a shower of bats up into the night sky. Wind howls around he body, making it creak and groan. Bare trees are knocked around with the powerful force, leaving them bent and close to collapsing on the ground. Once a dream house, now only inhabitable by the supernatural.
