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Name: Xin Tu
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May 25, 2015
Writing Feedback / Write a letter to this person for an English lesson [ielts writing] [3]

Subject:
You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter,

1. Tell him/her how you got to know about the lesson
2. Explain why you are interested in this lesson
3. Say when and where you want to have the lesson

My essay:
Dear Mr. Ivan,
My name is Terry. I live in your neighborhood since I have move into this area last year. I have heard from website that you are offering some English lessons for non-English speakers. So I'm just writing this letter to see if I can have the chance to learn English with you. At present, I'm a graduate student of U of A. As you can see, there is a high level requirement for the graduate study in Canada. We are required not only to understand the contents mentioned in the class but also to complete the assignments after it. Furthermore, we also need to take a defence of Master's degree by the end of graduate study. Thus, it is significant for me to improve my English skills, especially for the speaking language and writing language. As matter of fact, I have a part-time job in West Edmonton Mall recently. I wonder whether I can take your language course on Monday and Thursday afternoon, since I will be free at that time. Furthermore, I hope your course is hold not far from our area. That will be convenient for me.

Finally, thank you for your kindness and your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.

With my best regards!

Your neighbor Terry
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