Essays / Help to write a good admission essay! [3]

Hello everybody, my name is Vinicius I am from Brazil and I am new on this community, I entered here because I really need improve my writing. I am studying to become an English teacher here in my country and my weak point is writing. To reach my goal I need improve it and pass in the Cambridge exam CAE.

I want to start writing some essays about me and I really would like help to correct my common mistakes.

Thank you and see you soon.