Undergraduate / Why Yale? I am instantly welcomed into what will become my future support system. [4]

This is my first post on here. Any help would be appreciated! Thanks in advance!

"Having spent my past years as a scattered adventure, I desire stability and prolonged interactions that my experiences haven't allowed me. As an undecided applicant, I look for strong yet similarly seamless academic advising. The residential system unique to Yale appeals to me for these reasons precisely. The random assignment of freshmen into colleges would ensure that my living environment represents a microcosm of Yale's diversity and that I am instantly welcomed into what will become my future support system. Since advisors are also associated with colleges, I can have the same sense of continuity in my advising starting freshman year."

Please note: the admissions officer reading my application should (hopefully!) understand what the "scattered adventure" means. My Common App essay talks about how I spent most of my life expatriating from one country to another, spending no more than two years at one school, because of the nature of my dad's work.

Also, the word limit is 100 words. What I wrote is 101 words! I would still like feedback just so I know that I am on the right track with regards to content.