Speeches / Introductory speech about myself, my family, my job [16]

Hi there,

I will like to ask after our introduction, we will need to come out with a statement that is able to grab our audience's attention.

Any advice on that ? Coz I always seem to be having problems crafting out those statements..

Thanks in advance

Grammar, Usage / My teacher claims my essay was too ambiguous and general.. [7]

Thanks for your suggestions ! Will try to post an essay asap... =>

If I am writing an argumentative essay, how can ensure that my points are delivered across to my readers?