MapleLeaf32
Nov 17, 2015
Undergraduate / Hopefully, I'll be able to become successful in computer science. UC Personal Statement #2: MY WORLD [5]
I think you should work on the 'how has your world shaped you dreams and aspirations' part more. Right now, there is an abrupt shift from your world to your aspirations.
I think you should work on the 'how has your world shaped you dreams and aspirations' part more. Right now, there is an abrupt shift from your world to your aspirations.