davedave
Jul 28, 2009
Essays / "College dropout rates" - I'm having trouble with my introducion. [6]
It's not a researched paper.
It's not a researched paper.
davedave
Jul 28, 2009
Essays / "College dropout rates" - I'm having trouble with my introducion. [6]
Hopefully, someone can help me improve my introduction.
Introduction:
College dropout rates have increases dramatically in the past five years. Why has the dropout rate increases? Maybe college students have experienced stress from their school assignments. Also, they may have also experienced hardship from maintaining their job life and school life while trying to have a personal life. In my opinion, the dropout rates have increases because of college finance and difficultly, and college life is time consuming.
Hopefully, someone can help me improve my introduction.
Introduction:
College dropout rates have increases dramatically in the past five years. Why has the dropout rate increases? Maybe college students have experienced stress from their school assignments. Also, they may have also experienced hardship from maintaining their job life and school life while trying to have a personal life. In my opinion, the dropout rates have increases because of college finance and difficultly, and college life is time consuming.
