Undergraduate / 'The 100 book competition in kindergarten' - College Essay for Milwaukee and Parkside [3]

Please tell us about the particular life experiences, talents, commitments and/or interests you will bring to our campus that will enrich our community. (Parkside, Milwaukee)

The 100 book competition in kindergarten. Every single kindergartner in the school was involved, the goal, read 100 books or chapters before anyone else in the grade. Barely five at the time, I was at a disadvantage compared to the other kids that were months older than I was. But that wasn't something that was gonna stop me from striving to be king! Reading the last section of The teacher from the black lagoon, by Mike Thaler, felt like the longest minute of my life at the time. To make a long story short, I became king of books that year at Sauk Trail Elementary. Thus beginning to show my will and determination to be number one. From being able to run the most laps in my kindergarten gym class, to being able to type the fastest in my 5th grade class, the eagerness of being number one has only increased since then.

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