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Apr 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / There is a tendency of disinterest toward museums and historical sites by local people [4]
@JanFan and @behieli Thank you very much for your answers and suggestions) now i can see all drawbacks in my essay, it really helps me)
@justivy03 thank you a lot for your warm and sweet welcome! Also, i want to thank you for your commands given to me and corrections made) I will fairly follow your recommendations)
It was the fist time i posted my writing, and indeed the answers are so elaborate and solid) so i can really understand what i should rewrite or improve. I really full of energy and motivation to proceed to write and work harder!) THANK YOU VERY MUCH once more)
@JanFan and @behieli Thank you very much for your answers and suggestions) now i can see all drawbacks in my essay, it really helps me)
@justivy03 thank you a lot for your warm and sweet welcome! Also, i want to thank you for your commands given to me and corrections made) I will fairly follow your recommendations)
It was the fist time i posted my writing, and indeed the answers are so elaborate and solid) so i can really understand what i should rewrite or improve. I really full of energy and motivation to proceed to write and work harder!) THANK YOU VERY MUCH once more)