Amrita90
May 25, 2016
Graduate / "If there is will, there is a way" Statement of Purpose For PhD Abroad [3]
Hello, anyone check my SOP and tell me errors in it? I want to know how it looks like whether it shows my desire to work on relevant field or not. It is my first Draft.
One quote is "If there is will, there is a way". The above words play a key point in my learning. It motivates me to give my best in every step and frame my goals. Since my childhood, I have been obsessed to learn about new things and my parents who support me in each stage. I was in top 10 student of my class. During my school days, I had so many questions how our body made, how it functions, how technology connects to Biology and want to know more about this. I decided to pursue my education in this field after completion of my school. I had two options that time either Biotechnology or MBBS. I decided to prepare for one year for Master of surgery and Master of Science competitive exam. I got selected in some reputed universities but the fee is huge amount and my parents cannot afford it. I left that opportunities and then decided not to lost hope. I will achieve my goals and give my best.
There are number of challenges and rapid development in Science and Technology that inclined me toward engineering profession. I took admission in Bachelors of Technology in Biotechnology in XYZ University, one of reputed university. I have been exposed to many fields of study such as Cell Biology, Molecular Biology, Immunology, Biochemistry, Bioinformatics, Bioprocess, Genetics, Microbiology, Animal Biotechnology, Plant biotechnology. I want to know more about it practically so I took one month training on XY at Sciences and One week training on the topic XYZ at yz
University. This made me more inclined toward this field. I gave few seminars on some topics of Molecular Biology, Bioinformatics and Cell Biology.
In my final year, I got the opportunities to work with experienced researcher in XY University. I did six months project titled"XYZ". I have gained more practical knowledge and learnt more about Bioinformatics in this project. In my Project, I identified the meat species and submit SOME sequences on NCBI. I feel that a good researcher is not inborn out of reading books but also through gaining information from all other sources. During my project, I realized that Bioinformatics, System biology is wide approach for solution of scientific problems. This was the experience which made me towards research work in Bioinformatics, System Biology. I decided to do research in this area. In future I want to do more research and teaching in this research area.
I started preparing for GATE exam, cleared it and got admission in XYZ University, one of top universities in India. I got admitted in M.Tech in Systems Biology and learn further about this field. I got fellowship for two years and take my all expensive myself. I have exposed to Simulation, Artificial intelligence, Computational neuroscience, Petri Net, Advanced Bioinformatics, Optimization. I have Attended International Conference on Bioinformatics, Short Term Training Programme on Artificial Intelligence in Bioinformatics , conducted one Lab on KEGG(Kyoto Encyclopedia of Genes and Genomes) in Training Programme on Bioinformatics. I have participated in the Bioinformatics Workshop on Genomics at XY.
I did one year project titled "XYZ"I have learnt new information during this project and made me more dedicated toward research. I have published one research paper in International Journal, I feel very happy and gratify with one paper published in international journal. It makes me dream comes true.
I want to do research in System Biology and University is the best place to start. The university is focused on more research area, provides training on it. It is very highly reputed university. In addition, the strong collaboration with other departments that makes me to receive more knowledge. It provides me financial assistance in PhD, so I can carry out my research and take care of my expensive. The university is situated in good area of city and that also attracts me.
The major steps towards my goal is the doctorate study of your university. I am highly motivated and will be grateful if you give me the opportunity for doctorate study. I will contribute to university learning environment and able to justify your faith in me.
Hello, anyone check my SOP and tell me errors in it? I want to know how it looks like whether it shows my desire to work on relevant field or not. It is my first Draft.
One quote is "If there is will, there is a way". The above words play a key point in my learning. It motivates me to give my best in every step and frame my goals. Since my childhood, I have been obsessed to learn about new things and my parents who support me in each stage. I was in top 10 student of my class. During my school days, I had so many questions how our body made, how it functions, how technology connects to Biology and want to know more about this. I decided to pursue my education in this field after completion of my school. I had two options that time either Biotechnology or MBBS. I decided to prepare for one year for Master of surgery and Master of Science competitive exam. I got selected in some reputed universities but the fee is huge amount and my parents cannot afford it. I left that opportunities and then decided not to lost hope. I will achieve my goals and give my best.
There are number of challenges and rapid development in Science and Technology that inclined me toward engineering profession. I took admission in Bachelors of Technology in Biotechnology in XYZ University, one of reputed university. I have been exposed to many fields of study such as Cell Biology, Molecular Biology, Immunology, Biochemistry, Bioinformatics, Bioprocess, Genetics, Microbiology, Animal Biotechnology, Plant biotechnology. I want to know more about it practically so I took one month training on XY at Sciences and One week training on the topic XYZ at yz
University. This made me more inclined toward this field. I gave few seminars on some topics of Molecular Biology, Bioinformatics and Cell Biology.
In my final year, I got the opportunities to work with experienced researcher in XY University. I did six months project titled"XYZ". I have gained more practical knowledge and learnt more about Bioinformatics in this project. In my Project, I identified the meat species and submit SOME sequences on NCBI. I feel that a good researcher is not inborn out of reading books but also through gaining information from all other sources. During my project, I realized that Bioinformatics, System biology is wide approach for solution of scientific problems. This was the experience which made me towards research work in Bioinformatics, System Biology. I decided to do research in this area. In future I want to do more research and teaching in this research area.
I started preparing for GATE exam, cleared it and got admission in XYZ University, one of top universities in India. I got admitted in M.Tech in Systems Biology and learn further about this field. I got fellowship for two years and take my all expensive myself. I have exposed to Simulation, Artificial intelligence, Computational neuroscience, Petri Net, Advanced Bioinformatics, Optimization. I have Attended International Conference on Bioinformatics, Short Term Training Programme on Artificial Intelligence in Bioinformatics , conducted one Lab on KEGG(Kyoto Encyclopedia of Genes and Genomes) in Training Programme on Bioinformatics. I have participated in the Bioinformatics Workshop on Genomics at XY.
I did one year project titled "XYZ"I have learnt new information during this project and made me more dedicated toward research. I have published one research paper in International Journal, I feel very happy and gratify with one paper published in international journal. It makes me dream comes true.
I want to do research in System Biology and University is the best place to start. The university is focused on more research area, provides training on it. It is very highly reputed university. In addition, the strong collaboration with other departments that makes me to receive more knowledge. It provides me financial assistance in PhD, so I can carry out my research and take care of my expensive. The university is situated in good area of city and that also attracts me.
The major steps towards my goal is the doctorate study of your university. I am highly motivated and will be grateful if you give me the opportunity for doctorate study. I will contribute to university learning environment and able to justify your faith in me.