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dimiarA

Sep 2, 2016

Writing Feedback / The figures regards the variations in using transport to travel in England between 1985 and 2000 [2]

hay, just wanna help you with this

The figures regardsthe variations in using ~~transport~~ > (some mode of travel) to travel

... local bus tended to decline, ~~while that by~~(however/but) by using car, long (...) and other are increased during the period of 1985 - 2000(.)

~~Beseides~~ > Beside , the average miles by both walking and bicycle are witnessed the same (...) and the latter dropped from 51 miles to 41 ...

dimiarA

Aug 15, 2016

Grammar, Usage / Can you help me with the appropriate diction? Have I chose the right diction in this sentence? [2]

Can you help me with the appropriate diction? Have I chose the right diction in this sentence? or how about the grammar?

In the colonialism, Indonesian people were prosecuted with much demand such as: money, tax, time, and crops. Later on, they had to convert those demands to be some profitable products which could enrich the colonial power. It made Indonesians accustomed to get those things as much as possible (the quantity) in what matters they did though in coercion on imperialism