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Name: Faisel Muktar
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Faisel   
Oct 25, 2016
Scholarship / To eradicate the wrong thinking that all Muslims are terrorists. LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE essay [7]

@Holt....After I received your suggestions, i wrote my essay all over again. Though not perfect, is it OK if i submit like this for the Chevening scholarship?? please give me feedback; anything i should improve? thanks.

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The Scottish-American businessman, Andrew Carnegie, said "No man will make a great leader who wants to do it all himself, or to get all the credit for doing it". Today, the world is changing faster than ever before; science and technology are advancing rapidly, people from different back-grounds, cultures and languages are working together in organizations, and businesses and projects are getting more complex and require specific soft and technical skills. In such dynamic environment, team-working, delegating tasks, effective communication and other interpersonal skills are vital for leadership. I used these skills in my leadership in a final-year-project during undergraduate education. Moreover, I worked in Oman for 2 years in construction projects and implemented the skills of planning, effective communication, motivation, multitasking, etc. for the successful completion of projects.

I successfully led a team for a final-year-project titled 'Study of Various Types of Foundations for Medium-Sized Buildings' during my undergrad education in civil engineering in a renowned technology university in Pakistan under a merit scholarship. As a team, we analyzed and designed spread, strip, raft and pile foundations for a 6-storey commercial building. The basis of selection of the team leader and also the project type was based on academic excellence. The allocated project completion period was 1 year. Excluding myself, the team comprised of three members; each from different countries, Syria, Somalia and Ethiopia. The very first step I took, as a leader, was to prepare activity-plan and project schedule; I divided the project scope into four sections and assigned each of the members, including me, with a section based on competency and skill. One of the challenges in the project was that certain scope of the project was beyond undergraduate level, for instance, the design of raft and pile foundations, which are covered at Masters-level. I took the initiative to study various technical books related to our project together with consulting our project supervisor, and later shared the knowledge to the team through discussions and meetings. Members of the project team were from different backgrounds, with different cultures, languages and behaviors, which normally make communication a bit challenging; however, this was not the case in my leadership, as I also communicated in Arabic, Somali, Amharic and Urdu. Combining my technical and soft skills, I ensured the timely completion of the project.

In addition, I worked in Oman for 2 years as a site engineer for a construction company in two highway projects for earthworks scope; we were a subcontractor for multinational Turkish and Indian companies, STFA and Simplex. With STFA we worked in 'Dualization of BidBid-Sur Project', whereas with Simplex 'Batinah Expressway Package-3'. The main difficulties in delivering both projects were the limited time, high-level safety requirements and involvement of numerous stakeholders. In order to complete the project in time while meeting various stakeholders' requirements, I prepared daily to-do task plans and delegated works to the project team, closely worked with site foremen and surveyors, recorded and reported progresses on daily basis, shared my computational knowledge to surveyors when they needed, etc. Moreover, my ability to speak Arabic and Urdu enabled me to effectively communicate with different stakeholders within our company, main-contractor, consultant and local authorities; and since many important stakeholders were Omanis, Pakistanis, Indians and Bangladeshis who did not know English, knowledge of Arabic and Urdu languages were crucial.
Faisel   
Oct 21, 2016
Scholarship / To eradicate the wrong thinking that all Muslims are terrorists. LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE essay [7]

Sometimes, if you want to change a man's mind, you have to change the mind of the man next to him first. In order people follow someone or believe what he says, they want to first see the change or effect on him or on those whose lives he positively affected. People may doubt what you say, but they will always believe what you do and what you have become. My leadership and influencing roles that I will be covering are based on this core idea. I will commence with interesting roles I played during my undergraduate study by eradicating a stereotypical belief against international students, and leading a team in a final-year-project. I will also cover how I encouraged and supported my own two sisters in their education during difficult circumstances.

I remarkably achieved a goal for removing a stereotypical belief against international students in a university. This was during my undergraduate study in a university in XXX which comprised of international students from various countries in Africa and Asia. Many lecturers and local students believed that the foreign students in the university were dull and lazy, and cannot be as smart as the locals. They might have had this belief based on past performances by other students, but to me it was similar to the stereotypical belief some people have that black men are robbers and thieves, or similar to the generalized opinion that some people possess that all Muslims are terrorists. I realized that the only way to eradicate this wrong thinking is by performing better, so I worked hard in my studies until I stood the top student in class during the first two semesters. This achievement motivated other international students in the department. I also engaged in tutoring some of the international students and encourage them to perform better as well. Soon, lecturers started acknowledging and praising international students for outstanding performances and the image of International students in the department was not the same again. This in turn influenced other faculties in the university.

During my final year education in the same university, I was team leader for a final year project. The team comprised of four students from different countries which makes communication challenging. However, I effectively communicated with the project team and properly delegated tasks. I managed in the successful completion of the project.

In addition to the above, I also encouraged, motivated and supported my two younger sisters to strive hard in their education even though my elder conservative brother and people in our uneducated society tried to make them discontinue their education and get married. Currently, my sisters are attending university education in the field of Midwifery and Health Officer.

To summarize, I have presented how I influenced in ending a stereotypical opinion against international students in a university, which shows how hard worker and persistent I am for bringing a change which benefits all. I also showed how supportive I was towards female education in less educated conservative societies.
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