MaKa
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Introduction to text about spacecraft measurements [2]
Hi! I'm having some problems getting a good flow in my text. This is what I want to write. How can I give it a better flow?
Cassini is the first spacecraft dedicated to extensive and longterm in situ and remote measurements of the Saturnian system. The Cassini spacecraft has been orbiting Saturn since July 2004. The Cassini Langmuir probe, part of the RPWS instrument package, is still, to the date of writing, in a good state of health. This means that more than 12 years of RPWS/LP measurements of Saturn's space environment are available for analysis.
I tried many versions but it just doesn't sound good. =( Thankful for any help.
Hi! I'm having some problems getting a good flow in my text. This is what I want to write. How can I give it a better flow?
Cassini is the first spacecraft dedicated to extensive and longterm in situ and remote measurements of the Saturnian system. The Cassini spacecraft has been orbiting Saturn since July 2004. The Cassini Langmuir probe, part of the RPWS instrument package, is still, to the date of writing, in a good state of health. This means that more than 12 years of RPWS/LP measurements of Saturn's space environment are available for analysis.
I tried many versions but it just doesn't sound good. =( Thankful for any help.
