APJ608
Oct 31, 2016
Scholarship / I believe that leadership is losing its true meaning lately - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE ESSAY [4]
Holt, thank you very much for you review, i can see you put real interest and provided honest suggestions.
i just came back from work and checked your suggestions. for the paragraph of school and college i changed it for something shorter and more general, So i can focus more on the labor experience as you mentioned.
In my experience I had some opportunities to lead others as I often participated in groups and communities since I was young.
frankly i have been struggling with the amount of words in the essays, there is so many things i consider important but i have such a short limit that i feel i cannot express the ideas completely.
i would like a suggestion on this, is it better to state short and general aspects of several experiences or maybe a more detailed description of one experience that shows the depth of the ideas
thank you very much for the support, it is really helpful
Holt, thank you very much for you review, i can see you put real interest and provided honest suggestions.
i just came back from work and checked your suggestions. for the paragraph of school and college i changed it for something shorter and more general, So i can focus more on the labor experience as you mentioned.
In my experience I had some opportunities to lead others as I often participated in groups and communities since I was young.
frankly i have been struggling with the amount of words in the essays, there is so many things i consider important but i have such a short limit that i feel i cannot express the ideas completely.
i would like a suggestion on this, is it better to state short and general aspects of several experiences or maybe a more detailed description of one experience that shows the depth of the ideas
thank you very much for the support, it is really helpful