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Jewel Stephen
In Margaret Laurence’s novel, The Stone Angel, a number of intricate human relationships are portrayed. One such relationship is between Hagar Shipley and Lottie Drieser. Although as a child Hagar Currie would be mortified to admit it, she ends up resembling her childhood friend in many ways. The two women are connected by such a unique bond, that through the years, Hagar’s memories will often reflect back upon the young girl that the townspeople had nicknamed: “No-name Lottie Drieser”. As time passes, and the two girls grow into women, their resemblance, both physically and emotionally, compliments the suffering that each will face as they grow older. Each woman has a unique inner strength that enables them to face great challenges without backing away, and each is the victim, sooner or later, of a society that judges its citizens based on social class, wealth and appearance. Beginning in her youth, to adolescence, and ultimately throughout her adulthood, Hagar will come to recognize, and accept, that her childhood friend, Lottie Drieser, was capable of the same inner strength, if not more, than herself, Hagar Shipley, is so proud in her own character.
Thanking You
Jewel Stephen
In Margaret Laurence’s novel, The Stone Angel, a number of intricate human relationships are portrayed. One such relationship is between Hagar Shipley and Lottie Drieser. Although as a child Hagar Currie would be mortified to admit it, she ends up resembling her childhood friend in many ways. The two women are connected by such a unique bond, that through the years, Hagar’s memories will often reflect back upon the young girl that the townspeople had nicknamed: “No-name Lottie Drieser”. As time passes, and the two girls grow into women, their resemblance, both physically and emotionally, compliments the suffering that each will face as they grow older. Each woman has a unique inner strength that enables them to face great challenges without backing away, and each is the victim, sooner or later, of a society that judges its citizens based on social class, wealth and appearance. Beginning in her youth, to adolescence, and ultimately throughout her adulthood, Hagar will come to recognize, and accept, that her childhood friend, Lottie Drieser, was capable of the same inner strength, if not more, than herself, Hagar Shipley, is so proud in her own character.
